Defeating the antagonist early: A lesson from Avatar: The Last Airbender and Spiderverse
There was a few rules I learned while writing my book: Show, don't tell (This one is most important), Have a compelling first sentence, and Don't defeat the antagonist too early. As important as the former two are, today's post is about the latter. When I began writing my book, I made an unconscious mistake: I let the protagonist defeat her too early. By too early, I mean in her second appearance, which was not a very good idea. I realised my mistake while watching Jed Herne's video on: 9 Plot Mistakes Every New Writer Makes . 'Beating the antagonist too early' is the very first mistake he mentions, and with good reason. If the main character beats the bad guy by the third chapter (or in my case the fifth), there will be no tension in your story. The stakes will be much lower because the antagonist is no longer threatening. We know the protagonist has beaten the antagonist once, surely they will be able to do it again. Once I had realised this, I very quickly ...